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市十校联考英语书面表达优秀答卷  

2008-03-24 14:20:43|  分类: 教育园地 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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登上鄞州高级中学两名高三学生的优秀答卷,供大家学习交流。 

书面表达题目:(满分30分)

目前,不少人在写作与交流中喜欢使用网络语言,有时讲汉语还夹杂着英语,如PK等。就此现象,你班最近举行了一场讨论。请根据下表的提示,客观地介绍讨论情况及你的观点。

40%的同学认为

60%的同学认为

你的观点

1、有点荒诞,有时让人无法理解

2、违背了汉语的语法规则,对学英语毫无帮助

1、幽默,活泼,语言更具多样

2、有助于表达思想

 

1、词数:100——120,开头已经写出(不计入总词数)。

2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3、参考词汇:荒诞ridiculous

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.

 

张莉娜(29分):

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.

Focused on this matter, an argument took place in our class lately. It turns out that we students hold two different attitudes towards Web Language.

40 percent of us think Web Language to be ridiculous, as it sometimes can’t be understood. Besides, it goes against the grammar of Chinese and makes no sense in helping people learn English.

The rest of us think that Web Language is humorous and interesting, which can help vary our language. What’s more, we can express ourselves better with it.

In my opinion, we may accept Web Language, for it does good to helping improve our English more or less. It can also promote our language to develop, so that our language will become nearer to perfection. So let’s try to use Web Language in a right way. (133词)

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郑璐(28分)

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language. We had a heated discussion on whether we should use Web language in our class recently.

40% of the students think it ridiculous to speak Web language such as PK, while we are speaking in Chinese. It does not good to our English study. What’s more, as Web language is always against the gramme of Chinese, it is difficult for people to understand.

While 60% of the students agree to use Web language. They think it is always humourous and lively, with a variety of interesting words and sentences. Besides, it’s convenient and can help to express ourselves easily.

In my opinion, we can use some Web language in proper situations, such as when we are chatting with friends. It can make the conversation more interesting. At least, it does no harm. (132 words)

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